To Whom it May Concern
Write more focused, concise, and effective correspondence by concentrating
on your specific audience.
You have done the necessary research, formulated a sensible proposal,
and even rewritten the final draft for your presentation at tomorrow's
staff meeting. The only factor you failed to consider is one of the
most important components of the communication process: knowing "to
whom it may concern."
How many countless documents have crossed your desk that left you scratching
your head with their redundant remarks, incomplete ideas, or unclear
instructions? I call these "so-what" messages because your
likely response to them is, "So what?" Are you to write a
report, hold a meeting, propose a solution, or file the information
for later use?
Whether it is a presentation to your peers, a memo to your staff, or
an email to an associate, it's not always what you say or how you say
it but how you connect to your audience that will determine the success
of your messages.
Who is your audience? Are you communicating to an entire client organization,
an average-sized department, or a few colleagues? Are they decision
makers, managers, or those with only veto power? Is their relationship
to you that of a supervisor, a peer, or a subordinate?
More often than not, your reports, letters, and memos will go through
several people either for approval or general information. When writing
to a mixed audience, first rank readers in importance. After you have
pinpointed and ranked each reader or group of readers, give the most
important readers their information first.
Knowing your audience will help you streamline your research, shape
your key message, select the most appropriate details, and adapt your
words more appropriately.
What are their interests? Part of knowing "to whom it may concern"
is knowing their concerns, biases, and backgrounds.
Vocabularies, areas of expertise, even mindsets differ as you move across
company hierarchies, as well as up and down them. What is of little
concern to a CEO may hold greater interest to a sales manager and be
of extreme importance to a marketing director.
Management will most likely be concerned with issues regarding profit
projections, a project's overall significance to the company, corporate
image concerns, and necessary next steps in planning.
General professionals will be more concerned with the day-to-day issues
why a project is undertaken, how the research is carried out, how the
policy will be reevaluated, and what specific part they play.
Specialists will be more interested in information required to do a
specific job such as statistics, forms, flow charts, maps, formulas,
and other things generally included in the "fine print."
Make your readers' interests a priority, and you'll grab and keep their
attention.
How much do they already know about the subject? Instead of reiterating
the obvious, be sure you don't overload others with meaningless or repetitive
detail. But be sure you give enough background on the problem so they
fully understand the situation.
While your primary audience may understand all the concepts and terms,
your secondary readers may need more detail because of their uninvolvement.
And avoid using jargon for those readers outside your narrow field.
You're only courting misunderstanding.
How much your readers know dictates how much detail and what detail
to include in which sections of your document.
So what's the answer to the dilemma when communicating with multiple
readers who have varied interests, backgrounds, and technical expertise?
Structure. Put your most important information to your most important
reader up front. Lesser-ranking readers will need to read further to
get the details they want.
How will they use your information? Delivering a specific point in your
document is your responsibility. Do you expect your readers to consider,
discuss, act on, research, or instruct others? The answer to this question
will help you decide whether to write, phone, or meet face to face.
If your oral presentation or document is meant to keep them informed
on new advances in their field, give a broad scope of the discovery
and zero in on its significance for other projects and decisions. If
you want them to duplicate or build on your work, give them direction
all the if's, and's, what's, and how's. If they are to use your info
as the basis for a decision, present your case persuasively to win their
cooperation.
Identify the "to whom it may concern" of your documents and
oral presentations and customize your intentions and details accordingly.
Clear intentions result in effective results.
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